Autunm Rain

On windows the raindrops, the raindrops are knocking So smoothly, constantly, not ever stopping, The autumn rain falling and tapping on the pane. Glass weeping is the signs of the rain On windows the raindrops, the raindrops are knocking.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/3/2018 11:44:00 AM

I love the heart stop rhythm of your beautiful verse Josh, thanks for sharing, have a great day

Josh Heree
Date: 7/6/2018 4:23:00 PM

thanks, Pixie.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/2/2018 3:56:00 PM

Hi Josh.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Josh Heree
Date: 7/2/2018 8:52:00 PM

thanks, lyric.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/28/2018 4:39:00 PM

On days like today I cloud wish for me some Autumn Rain.. nice piece!

Josh Heree
Date: 6/28/2018 6:04:00 PM

Thanks, lyric :-]