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Autumn's Sweet Song

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Autumn's Sweet Song

like ballet dancers

in colourful pinafores

an impromptu dance

choreographed by the wind

leaves dance to Autumn's sweet song

for Nathan's contest "Tanka (Season)"

Copyright © Francine Roberts

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:25:00 AM
    I really like this one..Great work that you have presented..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:30:00 PM
    This is one I would have liked to have seen in the top ten! Congrats, Francine.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:25:00 PM
    Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Francine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:12:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:52:00 PM
    FRANCINE, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:48:00 PM
    wonderful write Francine.....enjoyed

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:52:00 AM
    I haven't heard that word "pinafores" for ages and it lends a delightful essence of a time from the past. A wonderful entry Francine; wish you all the best! Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:40:00 PM
    Francine, So lovely! I see it and hear it in your divine verse. Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Francine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:36:00 AM
    beautiful tanka, Francine

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:39:00 PM
    I agree with everything Jack has said just below.

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:48:00 PM
    ohh, francine.. winsome piece that makes me want to pirouette!... thanks for including me on your list in your recent contest; i had fun.. you inspire!... best wishes and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Wow! An awesome poem my friend. I love it. Good luck in the contest! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 1:11:00 PM
    An absolutely beautiful description of this beautiful season! Good luck... big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:54:00 AM
    lovely! my favorite line is the 4th one - perfect!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:36:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery here Francine!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:05:00 AM
    A beautiful tanka and I CAN hear it singing! This should make the winner's list. It would be on mine.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:38:00 AM
    WOW! very creative friend Francine..good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:23:00 AM
    This is just fantastic, Francine!!! and thanks so much for my win. I didn't know if you would like that sonnet too much or not! Luv, Andrea