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During my morning strolls along country paths The world comes alive in all its gleam n’ glitter What lovely autumn vistas unfurl and pass me by What miracles of creation, what wonders of life What variety, what fantastic medley What serene peace, what easeful tranquility Sights and scenes that hold one’s breaths Sounds and songs that chase away the moody aches Autumn leaves of crimson red, lemon yellow And rusty orange, as they drop, they swirl and whirl Fly in the wind, some landing on my body and tickling me- A rare feel that this special season alone can give! Avian chatter of birds migrating to the south, Blended with the music of leaping cataracts, And their echoes sent out by tall rocks and giant boulders. All that pleases the eye and ear in euphoric delight! Had I been a Raphael or Rembrandt, I would have transferred those scenes onto a canvas, Which one would never get tired of gazing at, And kept in the drawing room for everyone to see Or a Wordsworth to have composed those immortal Tintern Abbey lines, inspired by these ‘beauteous forms’ To be recalled and recited by men of all ages and climes That they ever ring resonant in their private closets! Dec. 14.2022 ~Placed Third~ Brian's Contest- You Choose ~Placed Second ~ Still Life of Autumn Scene Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 1/22/2023 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful autumn captured beautifully Valsa. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/21/2023 2:41:00 PM
An absolutely wonderful description,Valsa. You kept me engrossed from beginning to end.
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Date: 12/29/2022 4:42:00 PM
You've described it as if you were there walking through Autumns beauty, words painted, the Rembrandt of words. Valsa, congratulations on your win! A blessed new year to you and yours! ~Anaya
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Date: 12/29/2022 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. I wish I was with her walking. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
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Date: 12/29/2022 4:30:00 AM
A fascinating panorama you've painted my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your win and this superb piece! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:08:00 PM
Great work, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 6:18:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your contest win dear, Valsa. You penned such a wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:50:00 PM
Valsa, you set a wonderful scene and walked me there. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Date: 12/28/2022 7:35:00 PM
thanks a lot Eve for the placement given to my poem. Wish you a Happy New Year .....
Date: 12/14/2022 6:59:00 PM
Amazingly fresh and vivid imagery from your wide-open poetic eye, Valsa. Yours is the gift of seeing the world afresh and refreshed with every newborn day. May it always be so. Sigh! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful, descriptive piece of writing, Dear Valsa - Your poem truly reminds a painting of Autumn, with fabulous images and details of natural sceneries we admire ! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 12/14/2022 7:00:00 AM
Valsa. I really loved how you used creative verbiage to create such magnificent metaphors. You have crafted a poem that is both very descriptive and quite idiomatic. You also convey some really admirable feelings. Best wishes for the contest. A Fave.
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Date: 12/14/2022 6:03:00 AM
Reveling in joy of autumn, Valsa. Enjoyed the beautiful imagery crafted in artistic vocabulary. Best to you.
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Date: 12/14/2022 4:13:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work you have composed in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Autumn is beautiful and the change in the temperature from the heat of summer is marvelous. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/14/2022 1:55:00 AM
Beautifully done. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 12/14/2022 1:08:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you depict great sentiments. May the New Year continue like this...in serenity.
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Date: 12/13/2022 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful autumn imagery Valsa, my favourite season without a doubt, would love to go to New England as the colours are amazing. Tom
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Date: 12/13/2022 8:55:00 PM
Lovely and beautiful scenery you have embraced, to me there is no better place to be, I love to see all the beautiful creations God has made available for those who take notice, to let my mind go at ease away from all the chaos, that's where you would find me are out in the middle of the river : )
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