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Autumn's Furlough

Slow dance weather’s well Faded leaf kicks last hurrah work done coming home

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John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2010 6:02:00 PM

Congratulations John on a fine poem's win. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2010 5:05:00 PM

the second and third lines are lovely and unique! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2010 1:00:00 PM

interesting take! the leafs fade kicks last hurrah/would keep it in the moment / last line is a very nice juxtapose. Light & Love

Date: 4/23/2010 12:14:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. I think most will relate to your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest John. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 6:18:00 AM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo ...enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM

Excellent haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:30:00 PM

Congrats for the win

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 11:16:00 PM

John, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/22/2010 7:20:00 PM

John~ A very nice entry for the contest! Good luck! Laura :)