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Autumns Door ~

Credence aligned along the corridores of passage Which usher in through the portends This autumns door.... Such colourful banners of latitudes sprinkling Flowing waters of repose that still echo Inside, these sanctuaries walls Guarded by the sentry whom stands at their gate The entrance to the destined temple Of the blessed, and eternal soul.... Silver and gold adorning nativities scene A sacred reminder of divinities call To have and to hold such prophetical promises "Profound," laid afore this starlit alter Treasures as verse, whose words do echo Atop the tumbling of the organs keys.... Assembling choirs of angelic voices Proclaiming these melodies of harmonies chords While the infant smiled, and gazed into the future ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In, through the autumns door ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 7:54:00 AM
Ah! this is so painfully beautiful!...soon we'll be seeing these beautiful images everyday!! I get to behave like a kid and no one will think I' foolish. lol This is a definite favorite. Thanks for the lovely comments, John. Glad you liked it..and I sincerely hope my is doing fine. God blessings to you as you go through your days!....and as always, much love to you! Audrey
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:54:00 PM
You paint vivid picture with your words. Great write!
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:24:00 PM
What a beautiful and divine picture you have painted. Lovely.
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:45:00 AM
John, So good to hear from you my dear friend. I've thought about you a lot John over the last few months while I was away from the site attending my first year of college. My heart has been rather heavy over the argument we had. I'm sorry that happened John! Your poetry seems to changed John, it's more subtle and peaceful. I love your poetry as I love your soul, YF4l, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:16:00 PM
this is very pretty to read(: a wonderful poem for autumn, the moment it arrives. keep writing these delightful writes of yours. & thanks, as always, so encouraging John. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this latest gem, John! I enjoyed the fantastic imagery and am caught up in the joy of this magnificent scene! Still want more, though..keep writing..Thanks for leaving comments on mine. They are always encouraging and kind. God bless you and yours too:) Always, Audrey
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:34:00 AM
This is wonderful, you've drawn a splendid picture. Loved it! kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:11:00 AM
My, how beautiful is this? So good to see you back and commenting John, not seen you for an age! Hope all is well with you, thanks for your welcome comments on my sestina and as ever. Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:03:00 PM
wow, I wasn't sure if this were the entrance to heaven or symbolic of Christ coming to the world, but you wrote it beautifully. Thanks for being the kind and generous soul that you are. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:06:00 PM
Wonderful words John ..so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:55:00 PM
How wonderful it is to be able to read such beauty once again,I can picture the sanctuary walls,guarded walls,suffocating and then the ending offers much hope,as the infant smiles to the future and the angels sing,beautiful poem John. . .C
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:22:00 AM
What a lovely description of the infant viewing the path through life that leads to heaven, John! It's so wonderful to see you posting again. Your presence here has been greatly missed and I appreciate the spiritually uplifting quality of your poetry. Welcome back, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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