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Autumn's Breath

i gather my thoughts like a squirrel scurrying to find nuts as it rustles through leaves on crisp lawns the air is warm as am i when wrapped in thoughts of you i can almost feel your touch press against me a breath of air touches there as autumn breathes slightly cooler then you memories twirl in my mind like these little leaves as they spiral down suddenly i am blushed more than the trees as i remember our first kiss i look at the branches slightly quivering in the wind as did i back then as i watch the sun fade slightly redder than i the ground and trees mirror her reflection i marvel at the beauty and wonder why does everything so beautiful have to end soon these trees will be stripped of color stand naked in blankets of white autumn breathes again somewhat cooler than before i shiver beneath her touch and my thoughts fade with the night... the scent of autumn fills the air as i head back home i can hear the crackle of fresh burning wood you await by the fire your lips reach towards mine i tremble within i feel your breath against my flesh and i remember autumn's breath and blush as i think perhaps there is beauty in being naked beneath blankets of white

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Date: 8/26/2019 4:53:00 PM
Wow. Imagery with power and soft caresses... Excellent pen! Bravo! Ann Elves have come to visit, then they came to stay. Hum...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/26/2019 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Ann...i had to read this poem, penned so long ago...i guess sometimes my muse writes of warmth and love when it comes out of the darkness for a bit.... hugs :)
Date: 9/4/2013 4:48:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery in this piece! Absolutely amazing! Very nicely done, Sandra!...I have also entered the "Autumn's Breath" contest...Thank you for reading my poem, "I Want To Be Yours", and for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/26/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Kelly :)
Date: 8/22/2013 8:44:00 PM
I like it Sandra! Refreshing and beautiful! jimbo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 8:53:00 PM
thank you so much Jim, autumn is a beautiful time of year...so many colors and images :)
Date: 8/22/2013 8:12:00 PM
Wow wow wow, two poems in a row to my favorites. This is why you are on my favorite poets list.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 8:22:00 PM
thank you so much Richard...my muse has been wanting to sing.... :) Hope you have a great weekend, hugs and peace!
Date: 8/22/2013 6:08:00 PM
- Sandra, this is BEAUTIFUL!! - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise....I wish you all the best :) XoXo
Date: 8/22/2013 5:30:00 PM
beautiful write : )
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 5:54:00 PM
thank you Jack :)
Date: 8/22/2013 8:02:00 AM
The title just drew me in because I've written one called '' Reflections As The Summer Breathes'' Your work is beautiful and descriptive which I like.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 5:55:00 PM
I will have to check it out...I have written some others with autumn as the metaphor, so coming up with this one for the contest was a challenge since I have several already on this theme! Thank you :)
Date: 8/21/2013 10:24:00 PM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much...hope you have a great evening :)
Date: 8/21/2013 3:30:00 PM
Magical feel in this lovely and well versed poem. Love the last lines especially :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2013 5:57:00 PM
thank you Karen...I have a few piece with autumn as the theme...one is love related and the other I believe was death related...it was hard to come up with another for the contest being I have used many images from the season in the past! Have a great night :)

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