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Autumn's Breath

The archway formed of trees was green It was shade from summer's heat Splendid archway cover invites Come love to this retreat Now the archway hangs in color Rust, orange, yellow, brown Drawing home the inhabitants Come here from bustling town As filtered sunlight dances there Leaves aglow bonce with glee Walk the road slowly in Autumn Stressed busy life now flee Autumn arches call come my love Spend some time in peace~ rest Let the burgundy surround now 'Pon autumn's road be blessed Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest: Autumn's Breath Written August 20, 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations, Sara !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/13/2013 5:54:00 AM

Sara you have excelled with this write a most worthy winner congrats Shadow x smile

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/12/2013 11:08:00 AM

Lovely and beautiful piece,Sara.Congrats on your superb win in this contest.Great write.

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:19:00 AM

a beautiful win and theme Sara ~SKAT~

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 7:29:00 PM

i love archway more than autumn. . Congrats on your win. Morgan

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/11/2013 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Sara! Congratulations on your win, as well! Nicely done!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/11/2013 10:06:00 AM

Congrats again..this is very pretty..BG

Donna Jones

Date: 9/10/2013 5:59:00 PM

Another beauty Sara....congratulations

Joseph May

Date: 9/10/2013 5:28:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2013 12:16:00 PM

- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Sara. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/22/2013 8:43:00 PM

A splendid write...you did autumn justice! Hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2013 4:53:00 PM

this is beautiful, my friend

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/20/2013 5:04:00 PM

You got me in the mood for autumn with this write my friend! And that always leads to the excitement of Halloween! I know you don't get into Halloween much, so please bear with me during the next couple of months starting at the end of August! I will write other things this time, it won't all be Halloween, so I'll try and sprinkle in other poems for your enjoyment as well as my fiendishly great writes! Well this poem here you have written is one of my favorites of yours, such Awesome Work!!

Rachel W

Date: 8/20/2013 8:20:00 AM

It certainly has felt like fall where I live lately, so I can relate with your beautiful words. Good one, Sara!

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/20/2013 8:03:00 AM

How I love this poem having lived in Maine with motley autumn leaves, raking them, playing jumping chidren hiding in leaves, the scent of smelling burn. Yes they come from New York and afar to see the glee of autumn leaves. Nicely done muse of autumn skies come round to color the world before the cold winds of winter. Uplifting, you uplifted me: lifting each other the lightness of our thoughts meld as one. Robert Henry Poulin

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2013 7:29:00 AM

Beautiful words, Sara. autumn is so colorful.