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Autumn's Breath

Autumn's breath is swiftly blowing Trees and branches gently bowing Leaves of red and yellow strowing Over streets and gardens going Leaves are turning, tumbling, showing Autumn's breath is swiftly blowing Orange and golden brightly glowing Twirling, pausing, down they're flowing Paths and fences overgrowing Forest, field, and town o'erflowing Autumn's breath is swiftly blowing Vivid shades and colours snowing Piles and stashes steady growing Then a sudden gust upthrowing Still the colours banks outflowing Autumn's breath is swiftly flowing

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Date: 9/14/2013 9:08:00 AM
Isaiah, congrats !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:06:00 AM
simply beautiful Isaiah breath taking congrats Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:29:00 AM
wonderful winning poem ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/11/2013 7:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
Wow, love the rhyme repeat. sounds great read aloud. congrats. BG
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Date: 9/10/2013 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations Isaiah ...loved your poem..
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Date: 9/10/2013 5:31:00 PM
nice monorhyme....congrats on your win
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Date: 9/10/2013 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Isaiah!...Amazing poem, once again, very nicely done...by the way, my poem placed as well!
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Date: 9/10/2013 12:22:00 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Isaiah. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:11:00 PM
Amazing poem, Isaiah! I really loved reading this one! Your words flow nicely with your rhymes. Very well done. Good luck in the contest! I have also written a poem titled "Autumn's Breath". Please, read it sometime. And, thank you for the great comments on my poem "The Castle". I really appreciate it! I'm sorry, I knew my poem wasn't exactly what you asked for. I am glad that I was placed 6th, nevertheless.
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Date: 8/16/2013 5:35:00 AM
Ah wow superbly flowing n rhymin autumnal imagery! Many kudos.
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Date: 8/15/2013 6:13:00 PM
I felt like I was just flowing along with your words..I so enjoyed this. BG
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