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Autumns Breath

I wander down the forest trails the farmer collecting the last bales golden brown they shine in the sun the whirr of wings as birds escape the guns The various gleaming colours of leaves as spiraling down they twist and turn the fields bare, stripped of their crops now lay farrow resting until next spring Some light snow at foot of trees sparkles pristine and lovely against the Autumn browns sullen yet glowing the grey skies attract me as I stroll on down to the bubbling brook Flashes of brilliance as the kingfisher passes he hovers above a post then alights to fish a silver shadow comes in sight, he watches then in a blur he dives and catches a fish Now all that's left behind are glistening ripples spreading out far and wide in perfect cylindrical rings watching them fade away as the water stills becoming once more a mirror reflecting the azure skies A massive pile of logs with scarlet toadstools scattered the croak of a spotted frog as he takes a dive yellow hammer is drilling away in the canopy where verdant greens mix with red cedar leaves The wonders awaiting at each step quite take my breath a sly red fox disappearing through the emerald grasses a roar and a crash of antlers as the fallow deer stags fight their white spots shining as they spar back and forth All this and birds singing with the pure joy of living the rustles that abound all around me as I listen the glorious golds, reds and browns surround me as I stand in a clearing drinking all the beauty in Written 08/12/2013 contest Autumns Breath

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Date: 9/14/2013 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations Shadow!!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
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Date: 9/14/2013 1:14:00 PM
hi Linda Ty for reading and nice review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/13/2013 3:24:00 PM
The autumn imagery in this poem is rich and beautiful, making this a very enjoyable poem to read. Nicely done, Shadow! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:16:00 AM
hi Kelly and keep writing loved your poem and ty for kind review of my work Shadow x smile
Date: 9/12/2013 8:28:00 AM
beautiful... congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:24:00 AM
Ty Skat appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 9/11/2013 7:42:00 PM
Linda,Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:25:00 AM
hi and TY Morgan Shadow x smile
Date: 9/11/2013 1:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning contest entry..Congrats on your placement in the winners' list..Sara
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:26:00 AM
hi Sara ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 9/11/2013 8:08:00 AM
Breathtaking! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:26:00 AM
hi Richard and Ty so kind of you Shadow x smile
Date: 9/11/2013 7:36:00 AM
Wonderful ! congratulations !!
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:27:00 AM
hi Yvette ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 9/10/2013 6:13:00 PM
Shadow....a beautiful win..congratulations
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:28:00 AM
hi Donna Ty much appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 9/10/2013 12:21:00 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Shadow. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 5:29:00 AM
well done on win and ty Autumn the pause before winter Shadow x smile
Date: 8/17/2013 12:45:00 PM
wow! what a vivid description
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:30:00 PM
ty Vandana I like writing about nature Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/13/2013 5:57:00 AM
beautiful write Shadow.....you capture the breath of autumn well...
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Date: 8/13/2013 1:41:00 PM
Tnx Joseph it's a beautiful time of year so inspiring Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/12/2013 4:04:00 PM
Can see and hear everything through your words Shadow,,,nicely done....
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Date: 8/12/2013 4:19:00 PM
hi Donna I love it when as you read it takes shape before your eyes glad you felt that Ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/12/2013 10:24:00 AM
would love to watch and feel the views on widescreen , shadow... such visual appeal that enchants my senses...:) entranced..:huggs
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Date: 8/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
Hi Nette someone else who appreciates simple beauty ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/12/2013 8:53:00 AM
You really know how to set the tone of the environment. It feels almost Victorian style. I truly enjoy what you did here.
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Date: 8/12/2013 3:14:00 PM
hi Drake where have you been? i missed you. Victoerian hum I think you are right lol well spotted Shadow xox smiles
Date: 8/11/2013 11:59:00 PM
Nicely done. I like the pastoral scene depicted through these lines
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Date: 8/12/2013 5:38:00 AM
hi PJ ty for taking time to read my work most inspiring Shadow x smiles

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