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Autumn's Arrival

Blue water tongues carve mountain sides Pure singing into ocean tides Rich ruby, amber, golden gems Now carpet mother nature’s den The living light that scraped the sky Is cloaked in autumn’s cooling sigh The beasts of warmth and chill alike Prepare for winter’s bitter bite Tick tocking towards a season’s death Life shall renew in springtime breath

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2016 9:30:00 PM

Robin, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2016 2:58:00 AM

ROBIN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT

Justin Hensley

Date: 6/3/2009 5:48:00 PM

Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/3/2009 7:32:00 AM

Congrats Robin on being featured with "Autumn's Arrival." Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/31/2009 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations and more blessings. Continue to enjoy the success and honor. Ernilando

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:40:00 PM

Robin, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/26/2009 2:09:00 PM

Beautiful writing that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Robin !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Robin. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 10/27/2008 1:15:00 PM

Pretty, insightful and almost perfect! Thanks for writing this and for commenting on RAT.

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/26/2008 7:15:00 AM

This is so wonderful. I can see the beautiful images of autumn already. The leaves are so pretty while changing colors. The rhyming couplets give a special spark to the poem. Great job! ~Joseph

Mc Mc

Date: 10/24/2008 10:08:00 PM

Blue water tongues carve mountain sides Pure singing into ocean tides! adore and such imagery!! great work!

Kelsi Nichols

Date: 10/22/2008 4:19:00 PM

I love this. It portrays the feeling off autumn so accurately!!! While reading this, I could almost smell the fall season ! (which is especially nice for how hot it is here for it being autumn)

Adell Foster

Date: 10/22/2008 12:12:00 PM

Robin this is an extraordinary Autumn write, I love the vivid portait you've painted with your words for all to enjoy. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments, I truly appreciate it :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell