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Autumnal Grace

potpourri of wreaths splatter night rhinestones with aisles of gold cashmere talc, stairways of herons ascend * sky flooding autumn light bulbs heaven drips of earth's elegance, drops of fern boughs collect hands calmly chiming psalms of fall's remains * a mantle bathed by wet stars (c)Contest of Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 2:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2012 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/6/2012 2:29:00 PM

The staircase and mantle merely demonstrate your excellent ability to turn anything into an elegant image! I really love this tanka...stimulates all the senses! Great write Nette! Love to ya, Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your win in Brian Strand's "Form Or Free Up To Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 6:08:00 PM

Very autumnal. Very graceful. Those wet stars in the heavens! I remember this one and am finally seeing the winners' list here to wish you a belated congrratulations, Nette. LUv,Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/24/2011 3:00:00 PM

truely a sensory puzzlement and wonder congrad's Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/24/2011 8:34:00 AM

Your poems walk across the paper as if on the tiptoes of some magical sprite! Another beauty!! Congrats!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 8:04:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on another expressive entry so beautiful and a great big win for u luv.. enjoy .. u always amaze this "Sweetheart".. oh kitty shopping today..so fun..

Kash Poet

Date: 6/24/2011 7:45:00 AM

Congrats Nette on your win with this beautiful Tanka.

James Fraser

Date: 3/8/2011 4:35:00 AM

A view to behold Nette, so dreamy....:) smiles

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2010 2:50:00 PM

Deliciously subtle and bright. Kind of an autumnal plaything. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2010 8:54:00 PM

Another one loaded with great imagery! YOu are a romantic nature writer!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Nette. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/1/2010 8:46:00 AM

Hello Nette, So nice of you to stop by and read some of my work. Thank you, your to kind. I love this, the words flow and come together so rich! Just beautiful...........Thank you Nette As Always, Shar

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:44:00 AM

harry, you made my day with your warm reply; thanks! warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:43:00 AM

dr. ram, i take your message with happiness in my heart... blessings! warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:41:00 AM

chris, my pleasure to have you here; i am delighted by your presence and warm thoughts! thanks.. warnest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:40:00 AM

daver, how gracious of you to say this.. all my thanks! warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:38:00 AM

hello doris.. yes, autumn blooms and will soon give way to the whiteness of winter.. hope all is well with you.. thanks for dropping by.. warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:37:00 AM

deb, so nice of you to drop by; much apprecited with love.. warmest, nette

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:36:00 AM

awwh, so gald you liked this, linda-marie.. may your pen fly unto the sky! hugggs to you.. warmest, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2010 8:12:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv.. super piece..

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/28/2010 6:04:00 PM

Some beautiful descriptions you have written here..loved it ! Good luck in contest..take care~Deb

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/28/2010 4:10:00 PM

enjoyed reading today!! Fall has sprung.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/28/2010 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful, nette. Yours is so colorful and charming. I just wrote one (not yet posted) telling an opposite story. Love, Dave