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Autumnal Charm

chill arrives twirling like white spine, with each puff stringed leaves coil on embroidered trellises-- trimmed by russet tips while moon hides, gale spills fragrant mint and bright dew, touching skin of buds charmed ,as autumn wind encircles a dance through waft's chimes petals tip ballet down wet lanes, flaunting hues dyed in fall’s velvet doilies-- casting season's spell! * new form:shadorma---3-5-3-3-7-5 For Russel Sivey's Up the Autumn Air by nette onclaud 22 oct 12

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Date: 11/5/2012 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win> :-)
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful lines. Congrats on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 11/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2012 1:16:00 AM
it feels just wonderful to read this poem congrats on your in this contest.....spandan
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Date: 11/4/2012 12:59:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Great creativity..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2012 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette xx
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Date: 11/3/2012 11:42:00 PM
congratulations on your grand win Nette. Its a beautiful poem. cheers!!
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:36:00 PM
charm is a very good word to be in the title of this enchanting poem, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:11:00 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A GRANDIOSE WRITE AND WIN .. WOW SHARING IS SO FUN AT NUMBER ONE ..
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:02:00 PM
Lovely form and words. congratulations on yur win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/3/2012 5:59:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/25/2012 3:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem on Autumn!I can just visualise the scene!!Amazing!
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:26:00 PM
Outstanding piece my dear Nette. Love it!! Hugs n luv Michael
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:55:00 PM
WORDS CHARM NOT ONLY AUTUMN BUT ME AS WELL NETTE LUV .. THIS WRITE IS DIVINE AND KNOW IT WILL PLACE HIGH AT JUDGING .. ALWAYS AMAZING YOUR PRESENTATIONS LUV ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 9:14:00 AM
sheer poetic grace, nette, i just love reading your poems, they are enchanting...
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:12:00 AM
great write, nette, really lovely!! Jag
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Date: 10/22/2012 5:54:00 PM
a lovely poem that truly captures this amazing season!
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:22:00 PM
Great one that if for a contest will surely be a winner..Thanks for stopping by..I add a picture on my poem "Feline" when you click on "About This Poem"..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:39:00 PM
Nette, Thanks also for stopping by my blog..Sara
Date: 10/22/2012 2:54:00 PM
Nette, you find always so beautiful words - really lovely. - Have a sweet and good night. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/22/2012 2:06:00 PM
Wow, this is truly beautiful my friend! I really love this incredibly descriptive piece, one of awesome stature and pride! Your poem can stand out in the wind and make it back with perfection still in place! I truly enjoyed reading your illustrious poem, one of joyful luster and gorgeousness! You have masterfully written another masterpiece Nette! Great Work!!
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