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Autumnal

A mystery of branches now bare of leaves reach into bright, flamboyant sunshine. An arcane ritual that turns quiescent greens to a floating immolation. Ambivalent, we see a new outline, bittersweet, against a cloudless sky. Discarded leaves turn the ground, a luscious quintessence of browns. Intercessor of summer memories woven in stitches of every wondrous hue. This tactile tapestry hung against a space of sunlit blue. For John Hamilton 10 word Challenge 4th Place 1. *AMBIVALENT *2. *ARCANE 3. *BITTERSWEET 4. *LUSCIOUS 5. *INTERCESSOR 6. *QUIESCENT 7. *FLAMBOYANT 8 *IMMOLATION 9. TACTILE 10 *QUINTESSENCE

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Date: 11/27/2016 8:57:00 PM
Suzanne, congratulations on your win your poem is beautiful in the use of words : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/6/2016 7:51:00 PM
wowowow, he is gonna LOVE this . You really made good use of brevity as well. I am struggling with this one!
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Date: 10/29/2016 4:49:00 PM
Wow, Susan, you were able to compose a gem using the 10 words. Bravo for your excellent description of fall. Wishing you success in the contest!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/29/2016 6:39:00 PM
Nice to see you Carolyn: Thanks for your good wishes. SuZ
Date: 10/29/2016 9:14:00 AM
Very good here! :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/29/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Heidi

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