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Autumn Wish

Let not your love fall Like a gold leaf of autumn Frolicking then bye As drifted by the water In the river of no end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 8:09:00 AM
Lovely Teresita - I can see the golden leaf wafting in the air - great comparison. Thank you for your comment on my poem..
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Date: 9/23/2008 4:30:00 PM
I like this write and the picture that is paints, vivid imagery, and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/22/2008 10:19:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/22/2008 4:21:00 AM
wow that was a very deep one. It can be related to lots of things. Love Chitra
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