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Autumn Whispers

On a golden carpet of lustrous laurel another red leaf in amber blaze gleams, twirling to trumpets in waltz so aural blanket of glorious crimson autumn dreams. Iridescent veil orchestrates blue fir trees maple shimmers in draped sequins of crystal dew, swaying to layered hums of shivering breeze blazing in flames of proliferous mauve hue. Immersed in aroma of wet mountain slumber lavender dusk nervously cuddles silver frost, spreading gossamer melody on emerging umber bathing in scarlet rays, broken twigs embossed. Symphony of scintillating fervent topaz seas disperses from azure palate on electric sky, dripping to crevices of haloed tides to appease mellows of echoing wind for sandcastles to fly. Exploding ecstasy of an embellished petal springs peeping through rivulets in reaping wisps of desire, to a moonlit bridge, my whispering red leaf clings longing to strum tender strings in autumn's bonfire. August 6, 2020 Nature Rhyming Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brenda Chiri ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 2/2/2022 5:01:00 PM
Truly extraordinary...this poem has such a sensuous appeal to it! I am deeply impressed, Aditi.
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Date: 8/20/2020 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Aditi, great imagery and feeling in this beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:22:00 PM
Can we spell P E R F E C T I O N?! This poem is a little beyond that! Words fail me. Straight into my faves, Aditi! Just gorgeous poesy! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 8/8/2020 12:50:00 PM
you paint with words my poetic friend and breathe life into the world you paint, simply gorgeous...
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Date: 8/6/2020 2:20:00 PM
A beautiful season for sure, I just love all the colours the season provides. Stunning imagery Aditi. Tom
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