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Autumn Twinkles

crystal flakes twinkle through autumn's bare canopy... leaves sparkling in the dark yellow the tree's hues painting attic of churchyard... like fall's innocence ............... Skat's Autumn Haiku 10/23/2015

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Date: 11/1/2015 3:38:00 PM
Autumns come and autumns go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2015 8:37:00 AM
You graphically depict your version of Autumn as your poetic licence allowes you to envision it in all it's beauty. Congratulations on your win, Emile.
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Date: 10/30/2015 4:43:00 AM
Wonderful haiku nette n so is the win!Big congrats!
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Date: 10/29/2015 4:50:00 PM
so lovely. Congrats on the great win.
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:33:00 AM
Terrific Nette...the 2nd one is pure magic :)
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:28:00 AM
Big congratulations on Skats contest!!! great imagery!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 10/28/2015 7:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 10/28/2015 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette.
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:28:00 AM
Congrats on a great win!!.. Beautiful!!... :-)
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Date: 10/28/2015 1:11:00 AM
Nette, I'm pleased to have read every haiku on this page. Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:53:00 AM
Beautiful visual, Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/27/2015 11:38:00 AM
Especially like the first one, the way it sets an autumn scene, the "bare canopy." love, daver
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Date: 10/27/2015 7:37:00 AM
You painted stirring images with your pen as a brush! Beautiful!
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Date: 10/25/2015 11:34:00 AM
Both your images are a treat to read, Nette, but allow me to name the second one as my favourite! #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/24/2015 7:40:00 PM
Image feast and brain food my friend! Super 7 from me.. A7
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Date: 10/23/2015 8:08:00 AM
Nice entry nette. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:11:00 PM
Magnificent! Your words paint a beautiful picture, the imagery, perfectly attuned with the senses.Amazing scene in art.
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Date: 10/22/2015 10:50:00 PM
Oh...how amazing is this, Nette! Love it. Twinkle...gleaming...beautiful feel. Good luck, dear. Hugs
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