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Autumn Stroll Cinquain

Golden Outbursts Honeyed Pathways shimmer Matted Maple forests' Flaking golden outbursts entice Strolling FIRST October22, 2015 Contest: Autumn Stroll Cinquain Form Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:02:00 PM

Nice win

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/30/2015 4:05:00 AM

Thanks Skat!

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:06:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Balveen! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/29/2015 5:30:00 AM

Thanks for visiting my page and for appreciating the imagery!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2015 2:35:00 PM

Wow! This is strikingly beautiful, Balveen! Worthy of golden outbursts! ~ Congratulations on this deserved top placing! ~ Sweet regards // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/27/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thanks Paul for your kind compliments! Regards, Balvee

James Inman

Date: 10/26/2015 9:12:00 PM

Lovely Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:19:00 PM

James, many, many thanks!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/26/2015 9:05:00 PM

Congratulations! CayCay

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Caycay!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

so beautiful Balveen many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:09:00 PM

Sorry Jan! I posted that by mistake to you. Love

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:06:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the first placement for my first effort at writing a cinquain! Love, Balveen

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2015 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:10:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the first placement for my first effort at writing a cinquain! Love, Balveen

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/26/2015 6:39:00 PM

Wonderfully done, Balveen, especially using the word counts too. Nice imagery, and congrats on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/26/2015 9:04:00 PM

Sandra dear, thanks for all the appreciation! Love, Balveen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2015 8:15:00 PM

wow, you did it not only by syllable count by by word count too. I did mine that way. HOpe we can get brownie points for that!! Mine is not posted yet. I really like yours.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/23/2015 10:04:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for your good wishes!

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/22/2015 1:24:00 AM

Great images in your poem, Balveen! Enjoyed:)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/22/2015 1:33:00 AM

Wow! That's a real instant response from the other end of the world! Thank you so much Laura! Love, Balveen