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Dappled Sunlight streaming Casting dancing shadows Leaves whispering very gently… Listen Crunchy Foliage falls Wizened leaves decaying Autumnal blanket covers earth - Stunning 10~22~15 Contest Autumn Stroll Sponsor Eve Roper

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2021 5:18:00 AM

A gem from the past! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Jan! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 1:35:00 AM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2021 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Christuraj:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:03:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/29/2015 5:38:00 PM

BIG NUMBER WON.....CONGRATULATIONS...OVER AND OVER AGAIN....

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2015 5:42:00 PM

I'm flying high Judy:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:16:00 PM

Spectacular imagery, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2015 1:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Miss Sassy

Date: 10/28/2015 4:38:00 AM

I loved it! Brings back memories and I can almost smell the decaying leaves. Congratulations on a beautiful poem....Sassy

Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2015 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Miss Sassy - I am so glad you picked up on that I wanted to evoke a sense of smell without using the word - i love this time of year the sounds smells and the glorious colours of autumn:-) hugs jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/27/2015 5:38:00 PM

lovely double cinquain, jan, nice imagery; there were some very good poems in this contest - congrats on your win! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Charlotte I had great fun with this contest - the image was so inspiring:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2015 2:37:00 PM

This was a winner from the word GO!! Big congratulations, Jan:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks Paul I sure feel like I hit the jackpot today - can't stop smiling and it is down to you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/27/2015 2:23:00 PM

I knew this was a winner Jan, congratulations

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thanks Greg I'm so pleased Eve liked it :-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 10/26/2015 9:30:00 PM

Another win Jan!!!!!!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:25:00 AM

Had a good day on Sunday:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 10/26/2015 9:25:00 PM

Very pretty poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:25:00 AM

Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/26/2015 9:23:00 PM

Ummm! So romantic, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Balveen

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/26/2015 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations - a beautiful stroll, to be sure ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Cay Cay:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2015 6:54:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win! Thank you so very much for participating in my contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/26/2015 7:08:00 PM

You did a fabulous job in painting on my canvas; thank you so very much!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 6:56:00 PM

Eve it was a stunning image you found for us and I tried to do it justice:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

A portrait of living art Autumn’s grandeur is captured in this masterpiece. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 6:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for your delightful comment Emile - the image eve found for us was so so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/26/2015 6:42:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Jan, on your podium win for your lovely double Cinquain! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 6:44:00 PM

Oh ... Thanks so much Sandra the image was so delightful - I adore warm the colours in it :-) hugs jan xx

Laura Hay

Date: 10/23/2015 2:52:00 PM

Stunning indeed just like your words, good luck to you too Jan ;) , warm regards, Laura

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2015 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Laura the image is so inspiring:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 9:27:00 AM

An enchanting autumn stroll...stunning! Beautiful imagery, and the accompanying visual is great. gl in the contest (not that you need it!) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Paul the image Eve found for us is breathtakingly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 10/22/2015 10:03:00 PM

This is so lovely, dear Jan!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2015 4:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) hope you will have a go at my contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2015 3:17:00 PM

these are very pretty, Jan. Love the picture. it is cool that you are doing a contest. Do you mean for us to choose ONE Of the words and use it as our title, for example: Snow Acrostrain(however it is spelled). Just checking to be sure! I bet it will fill fast!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - yes do snow wind or rain as an acrostic and use the quatrian form with 2 lots of rhyming lines - have shown my poem on the contest page as an example :-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2015 12:02:00 PM

Wow Jan...really good. Hope your feeling better. Haven't seen you around much.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2015 9:45:00 AM

Morale is low Tim I wish there was more harmony on the site it is the worst I have seen it since I joined:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/22/2015 12:10:00 PM

I know the feeling. Reads and comments are down. I know you comment alot...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 12:04:00 PM

My back is much better thanks Tim - I see the specialist on 5th Nov -I may take break from soup sadly its not the place it used to be :-( hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/22/2015 10:55:00 AM

This is a moment that has been captured and preserved by your words, Jan, So lovely! 7. All the best in that contest! PS. Did you get to see Wilfred Ani's latest post on Soup? Nice surprise. hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 11:03:00 AM

Thanks Kim - will drop by and see - sadly like many others I am not reading and commenting so much these days:-( hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/22/2015 10:05:00 AM

Your words create a magical scene in your autumn stroll, Jan. A winner for me! 7, Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Sandra - it is such a stunning image - I have a third verse in mind I may post it :-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 7:24:00 AM

- A beautiful colorful autumn blanket :) - Here are my autumn day is gray, windy and wet - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 7:26:00 AM

It's incredibly windy here Anne Lise - i nearly got blown over it is so strong but the sun is shining and I'm having a good day:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/22/2015 7:15:00 AM

Puts me in the mood for a stroll. Nicely done Jan and good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 10/22/2015 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx