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Autumn Storm - Collaboration With Chris Green

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Trees outside are raging anger screams through branches down to leaves twigs chastise twigs As bark grumbles rough emotions suppressing the trunk seeking the root of the problem Burrowed deep between toes of saplings treasures hide or terror manipulates Trembling in the darkness earthen enclaves soiled decisions pending new growth awakenings Tentatively tentacles reach and entangle twine and talk awareness grows stronger Groundbreaking visions; appear as sunlight warms this destination and life again begins *** Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White December 3 2017

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Date: 12/5/2017 8:03:00 PM
Duir, this is excellently done! Love it
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Date: 12/4/2017 10:25:00 PM
A wonderful collab, and amazing poem! :)
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:52:00 PM
Darren and Chris this is a journey of a poem. From the trials to the sunlight-I love the ending. <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Date: 12/3/2017 6:10:00 PM
Darren and Chris, I love the uplifting spirit of your poem.
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Agnes
Date: 12/3/2017 10:08:00 AM
Excellent. Just excellent! xomo x2 :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:26:00 AM
Thanks ma mo :)
Date: 12/3/2017 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you for a very well written poem. I can relate to it as well :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Heidi

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