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Autumn Rites

awetum trees bough before the fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/15/2018 12:32:00 PM
Clever use of different spelling to extract multiple meanings, enjoyed this!
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Sand Blown
Date: 9/15/2018 4:35:00 PM
perhaps awetum and autumn should have been switched around?
Date: 9/3/2018 3:20:00 PM
love the element of contrast , sand...good write!..huggs
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Sand Blown
Date: 9/15/2018 4:32:00 PM
bow <---> bough...eh! one shots enough : )
Date: 9/3/2018 1:54:00 AM
Nice, reminds me a song fourseasons
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