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Autumn Rain

It is the only thing alive for miles; A wilted tree, with branches branched around For hollow life—a crooked form—with piles Of dying leaves, despite the rain around. A single cheerless leaf of pallid hue Lies waiting for the rain of sustenance; Another leaf departed; mournful view Devoured in ichor—rain of greyish glance. Is it the end? Perhaps it is the end. Is happiness a distant thing to fall? Tis not a question but a hardened bend, With frost a coming, death would see its fall Beneath the frozen earth; a burial urn Of solid clay, the autumn’s gradual; turn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/15/2016 7:29:00 PM
wow, a very classy sonnet here. I adore this form and write sonnets often. So I feel I can recognize one that is pretty good! Your meter is VERY good and I love where you used enjambment. Hope to see you again!
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Steve Hendrickson
Date: 5/16/2016 12:13:00 AM
I adore the sonnet form as well hence I always write them whenever I can. Thank you for reading :D

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