Autumn Marsh

cattails winnow- mirth abandons Red Winged Blackbirds -inspired by Brian Strand's poetry

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Sara Lokken

Date: 9/2/2009 7:33:00 AM

Very naturistic....the title is beautiful. Love, Sara:)

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 8/31/2009 6:05:00 PM

A well crafted tribute to autumn, leaving the reader with much to ponder- A favorite for my file, my friend- poet butterfly

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/31/2009 2:50:00 PM

wow how beautiful Jim---my friend the nature lover--charma

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/31/2009 9:36:00 AM

Beautiful and peaceful write James, it won't be long before it is that time of year again.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/31/2009 8:23:00 AM

I love this piece....it feels as if I am standing on the edge of a Minnesota pond in Autumn! Nicely done, James! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2009 6:16:00 AM

Beautiful piece Jim. Thank you for sharing today. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/31/2009 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful work Jimbo...lovely llines flowing into each other.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/31/2009 2:48:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku Mr. Goff,...I do long for the sights and feels ! james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2009 1:45:00 AM

I can see the cattails and the Red Winged Blackbirds. I suppose that fall coming has caused the lack of mirth. I don't see Red Winged Blackbirds around here very much any more. Very descriptive. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 8/31/2009 12:24:00 AM

Nice one Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.