Get Your Premium Membership

autumn magic -

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gregory Richard Barden.


Image result for autumn magic

there's something in the breath of fall, so dear that churns the deepest province of my soul once rooted in the start of each school year mixed with that earthy crispness of the cold the thrills of sports and studies, ivy-bound esteemed traditions held amidst the eaves more precious, still, that kindred heart I found through crazy, callow love among the leaves oh, how we drowned so eagerly each time we swam that leafy ocean ‘neath the trees yet, now it’s only mem’ries put to rhyme though, still, these weary eyes can clearly see ... there - deep within the fading autumn's mist … a shadow of the sweetheart I once kissed. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, October 3, 2019 (rewrite 10/1/21); *original version featured in the anthology “154 By 16 Poets” by Craig Cornish ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Autumn Sonnet" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Choice J, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/2/2020 12:22:00 AM
Happy to have found this wistful gem. So romantic and full of beautiful autumn descriptions. Love the lines, "I gladly drowned whene'er I chanced to swim / Sweet waters of her flesh and soul and mind". You have a gift with sonnets, poet friend. ~ John
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/3/2020 5:51:00 PM
That's very kind of you to say, John, and I thank you sincerely for your heartfelt words. Blessings to you, Friend! :o)
Date: 10/8/2019 12:38:00 AM
Romantic and lovely Greg. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! xxoo
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:31:00 AM
Many kindly thank you's for the sweet comments, Connie - you know how important your opinion is to me! Blessings, Dear Friend! :o) <3
Date: 10/7/2019 2:11:00 AM
Superb sonnet Greg, many congratulations on your top win :-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:30:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Jan, and I thank you very much, Dear Poet. Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 10/6/2019 5:44:00 PM
....and you keep falling for that same old line.....beautifully done Greg
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:29:00 AM
Indeed, I DO, my friend - many thanks to you, John, I so appreciate it! :o)
Date: 10/6/2019 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations for your top winning poem Gregory :)
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:29:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Heidi! :o) <3
Date: 10/6/2019 2:05:00 PM
this is a wonderful sonnet Greg, I am honored to stand at the top with you, congratulations on your win :) hugs
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:27:00 AM
I am honored to be on ANY list with you, Sandra, and so happy you liked my poem! Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 10/6/2019 1:33:00 PM
Congrats Greg on another win, an excellent sonnet with a touch of emotion, just how I like it!
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/9/2019 12:26:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Sir John, I'm really pleased you liked this one. Blessings to you! :o)
Date: 10/4/2019 7:45:00 AM
Oh splendid piece! A winner for me :))) Good luck in the contest Greg. xomo <3
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen - I'm pleased that you liked it.
Date: 10/4/2019 5:17:00 AM
Well done,,,Enjoyed the read...
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo - blessings! :o)
Date: 10/4/2019 2:20:00 AM
"Now mem'ries fall like leaves from each old limb," This is perfect! Good luck in the contest Greg!
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:16:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Caren, I so appreciate the wonderful comment! So nice that you "stopped by" - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 10/4/2019 1:02:00 AM
I love Fall. Your poem is lovely. God bless you
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2019 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Regina - I'm so pleased you like it! Blessings! :o) <3

Book: Reflection on the Important Things