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Autumn Love

Have written a number of love poems never one with so much meaning As I near the end of my seventy-nineth year My love is more melancholy leaning Been lovestruck for quite a number of years But now with my advancing age Our union is even more precious than ever Our love has turned a new page Tinged with a kind of quiet contentment Like a favourite easy chair Just to feel the presence of your soul mate And the love the two of you share No other feeling can even come close It defies conventional description It's the culmination of a lifetime of love In the purest form, no restrictions Why is it we only discover real love When the leaves on the trees start to fall We spend a lifetime in search of that moment When it was right beside us after all © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 11/2/2014 6:29:00 AM
Dear Jack: Lovely write. Lovely read. Simply lovely. All my best wishes to you my friend, Leon.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2014 6:36:00 AM
You are very kind my friend! Thanks a bunch! Jack
Date: 10/30/2014 10:13:00 PM
Your poem...Jack I love your poem. Very nice to see old love in fine form.
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Date: 10/31/2014 8:08:00 AM
YUP! I'm just an old "softie" if you know what I mean! LOL
Date: 10/30/2014 11:23:00 AM
Beautiful and touching... When we're young we're going full steam ahead and don't notice 1/2 the things around us... As we get older we tend to look outside our immediate thoughts to others... and by then have hopefully discovered how important true love can be... Hopefully by then, it hasn't already passed us by. Dragon agrees... He's in love with his blinged out new blankie... That's a 2 year old for you.
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Date: 10/30/2014 11:29:00 AM
Happy to see you concur... but I would have been surprised if it was otherwise! Huggsies XXX
Date: 10/30/2014 6:48:00 AM
Is it? Lol, just kidding :) Lucky duck haha
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/30/2014 7:51:00 AM
You better believe it dear Toquyen! YUP... a lucky ducky! XXX
Date: 10/29/2014 11:44:00 PM
This write is so very true my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have delighted me with the spectacular way you have written this masterful piece here! What an excellent write, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/30/2014 7:50:00 AM
As always, you brighten up my day with your kindness! Thanks a bunch my friend!!!

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