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The falling leaves drift by our window in autumn days, we now behold We spend our time with autumn flowers and dry crisp leaves of red and gold Since we left our spring the days grow short and soon we'll hear old winter's song But we'll miss the golden years of autumn when winter snow comes along From spring to fall we both did follow our youthful joys of long ago and now with days when leaves are falling we face the time of winter snow Autumn days are short and yet we know a song of love for us still plays Though we'll miss the golden years of autumn our love will warm our winter days April 26, 2016 -------------------------------------------------------------------- I used the same Lyric form, number of syllables, and meter as in the original lyrics displayed on the site as only two stanzas (but I doubled the stanzas to four in my poem). "Autumn Leaves by Natalie Cole" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PDzPv6NREKA

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Date: 11/8/2020 2:28:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/8/2020 8:08:00 AM
So sweet Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:15:00 AM
beautiful Sweet Sandra...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you once again, Laura! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/12/2016 10:11:00 PM
Great job, I also like your photo. Congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard! Sandra
Date: 10/12/2016 9:17:00 PM
you are naturally talented, grats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah, for your kind comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/12/2016 9:11:00 PM
Sandra, love your update of this classic. I'm a sucker for poems/songs about the seasons... Congrats! ~ John
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2016 6:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your kind comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 10/12/2016 7:13:00 PM
I remember this song and you did a great re-write. Congratulations on your placement.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2016 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/25/2016 7:45:00 AM
Congrats on your Golden Oldies playing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those oldies impressive..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:40:00 PM
Love the oldies, Sara! Thank you for stopping by with your congrats and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/26/2016 8:49:00 PM
Sandra, outstanding and beautiful, loved how you did your poem for the contest, and what a nice image, well I selected the same song, but used it only as inspiration for my poem, I am loving this 7
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:15:00 PM
OH, you did what I did in his LAST contest, matching lyrics to meter, etc. That is so nice. I had a feeling this one felt so much like the original. WELL DONE
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Date: 4/26/2016 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation of the original lyric Sandra good luck in the contest this is really outstanding:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/26/2016 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your encouraging and uplifting comment. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/26/2016 11:30:00 AM
Sandra, beautiful..you always carry a wonderful flow...:)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/26/2016 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo, for your uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/26/2016 11:02:00 AM
The bitter-sweet process of aging with the one you love. So nicely expressed, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/26/2016 12:41:00 PM
Hi Lin, thank you for stopping by with your expressive comment. Yes, bitter-sweet...time is going too fast. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/26/2016 9:58:00 AM
A well-interpreted piece based on the actual song. Good luck for the contest, Sandra. :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/26/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Moon Flower, for your supportive comment. Yes, I was happy to find that animated picture! Hugs, Sandra
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Moon Flower
Date: 4/26/2016 10:00:00 AM
By the way, I'm quite fascinated with the image you've posted. Beautiful!

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