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Autumn Leaves

I first met Autumn when I was very, very young, she was just a shy, quiet girl, but so very bright. These maple trees were our favorite to play among, as our laughter faded away with the falling sunlight. I can still see her brown sweater, and reddish-orange hair, blowing around her smiling face, like a flickering flame. Her innocent voice still whispers on October's cool air, near the place, where our lonely swing remains the same. As the summer days said goodbye, and welcomed September, the death of my dear, young friend came all too soon. Autumn was one of those whom you'd always remember, her soul was as beautiful as the shining, harvest moon. She was here, then gone, leaving words that were never spoke, to this day, I have never understood why Autumn had to leave. Her presence lingers on the wind, like drifting wood-smoke, as once a year, her playful spirit arises on All Hallow's Eve. August, 4th, 2014

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Date: 7/10/2015 1:46:00 AM
KELLY, CONGRATS ON YOUR ANY POEM WIN..... ALWAYS & FOREVER ~~LINDA~~
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Date: 7/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
Congrats for your WIN Kelly! ^_^
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/11/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy. I appreciate it :)
Date: 7/7/2015 4:14:00 PM
dropping by again Kelly with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/11/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Jan. I appreciate it! Hugs :)
Date: 7/7/2015 3:53:00 PM
Kelly, thank you for supporting "my ANY POEM contest #7." Have a nice day. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 11/2/2014 11:06:00 PM
Your poem is favored by uniqueness that draws one in and holds attention until the end! Really lovely Kelly!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/5/2014 11:52:00 PM
Thank you once again for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them very much, Connie!.... I'm happy that you've enjoyed this. It is one of my favorite poems that I've written so far.
Date: 10/19/2014 10:42:00 AM
absolutely charming, autumn as a beloved girl friend. love, daver
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/23/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Daver. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It is one of my favorite poems that I've written so far.
Date: 9/5/2014 11:35:00 AM
A magnificant personification your have written, Kelly. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/8/2014 1:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Lainie. I appreciate it so much!
Date: 8/30/2014 9:14:00 PM
Haunting and so very pretty Kelly. Every Autumn is made to be warm and crisp, coloful and fast changing, loyal yet transient, a beautiful face of Nature's grace, she now makes color in Heaven's season. Your allusion to wood smoke, harvest moon, and Halloween are beautiful and excite the senses Kelly...J.A.B.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/31/2014 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comments, once again. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, Justin.... Autumn does signify death and transition, yet it is also a new beginning. The New Year used to be celebrated around this time, rather than in January. There is also no better time than Halloween to commune with those that we've lost.
Date: 8/20/2014 10:11:00 PM
Dear Kelly: I love the melancholic whispers in this work. Lovely sadness here. Very touching to read. Keep writing. You've got a great feel for poetry. And I'm quite sure, you'll get your poetry book published soon. All the best, Leon.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/24/2014 1:49:00 AM
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem, Leon. Thank you for the kind and encouraging comments. I appreciate it so much! I hope to publish a book, someday. It would be a dream come true for me!
Date: 8/19/2014 8:10:00 PM
Lovely story of a beautiful friendship. Congratulations on your win.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/23/2014 9:02:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Faye!
Date: 8/18/2014 5:29:00 AM
A write that appeals to the senses, Kelly. congrats
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2014 10:46:00 PM
I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem, Dr. Ram. Thank you for the nice comments!
Date: 8/18/2014 1:30:00 AM
stirring my senses, Kelly... applause to you!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2014 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette. I always appreciate your kind comments!
Date: 8/17/2014 10:18:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations, Kelly on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pandita. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem. Your kind comments are always appreciated!
Date: 8/17/2014 5:42:00 PM
wonderful imagery and personification. many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/19/2014 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I always appreciate your kind comments! Hugs :)
Date: 8/17/2014 5:25:00 PM
This was a beautiful story of a girl named Autumn. I always thought it would have been the perfect name if I had borne a girl in the Autumn. My own daughter Angela missed being an Autumn baby by only four days. I like the way your title had two meanings!! So clever. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:18:00 PM
The changing seasons are such a gift, like your verse. Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
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Date: 8/5/2014 9:50:00 AM
Superb personification with apt imagery, kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/9/2014 1:09:00 AM
Thank you for the great comments, Dr. Ram. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 8/5/2014 6:47:00 AM
superb stuff Kelly, real great take on autumn, its such a lovely time of year wherever in the world you are. a real blessing to read. God bless , Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/8/2014 1:26:00 AM
Yes I agree, autumn is one of the most beautiful seasons, no matter where you live.... Thank you so much for the kind comments, Gordon. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 8/5/2014 5:43:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/8/2014 1:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Ravi!
Date: 8/4/2014 5:58:00 PM
Love the imagery and the metaphor Kelly...beautiful write...hugs Tim
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/7/2014 2:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tim. I really appreciate your kind comments! Hugs :)

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