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Autumn In the Air

September creeps close as August hangs on dearly subtle hints of Fall... an odd tingling in the air a slight shudder in the trees

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Elaine George

Date: 11/3/2016 4:44:00 AM

What a sensational Tanka, Tim!! Many congrats on your first place win. Lainey.

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/2/2016 8:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win. Sweet tanka.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 8:10:00 AM

Yes...I can feel through your words, especially the slight shudder in the trees, that autumn is in the air, Tim! Lovely and worthy of its high placing...congratulations! // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2016 7:15:00 AM

Well done Tim, congratulations...

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/4/2016 10:33:00 PM

Tim, congratulations on your podium win. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2016 9:30:00 PM

Hi Tim, Congratulations on your 3rd place win: -) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2016 6:52:00 PM

dropping back again with my congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2016 5:56:00 PM

Love the turn Tim..congrats on the big win

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2016 5:39:00 PM

I liked the unique perspective in your excellent tanka, Tim! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 5:24:00 PM

I love this imagery. I always feel melancholy as my birth month approaches. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2014 5:25:00 PM

wonderfully expressive write Tim :-) many congrats. Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2014 2:33:00 PM

how expressive, tim... you always keep me on a delight- mode... congrats and huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/17/2014 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Tim.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2014 5:13:00 AM

Perfectly done write on autumn, short and sweet, Tim. congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/17/2014 4:28:00 AM

- Yes, the autumn is here - Lovely poem, Tim - Congrats on your 4th place - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/16/2014 8:49:00 PM

The trees, the animals, the people, everything seems to feel a slight shudder as the autumn season approaches. You've captured that feeling perfectly!.... Nicely done, Tim! Congrats on your win!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/29/2012 3:10:00 AM

lovely autumn poem

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/24/2012 6:39:00 PM

i can hear that tingling and see the shutter through the trees...good haiku!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/23/2012 9:18:00 PM

This is a good Tanka for this time of the year. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem ( Sister ). Many blessings Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2012 7:00:00 AM

an awesome autumn tanka, probably my favorite of all these ones posted in a row. Love visiting lots of tankas!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 12:00:00 PM

good thing it was only a small vibrate... love the upcoming air approaching... always~PD

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/21/2012 9:09:00 AM

love it Tim. Now it's October and November is pushing in. love, Kathy

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/15/2012 7:08:00 PM

Definitely! Well done Tim! Good luck in the contest! :)

David Williams

Date: 10/14/2012 12:05:00 PM

Tim, I am enjoying reading all of the Autumn poems and this one is no exception, well done....David

Omneya Kamal

Date: 10/14/2012 9:57:00 AM

I love it!!! That's what I felt when I witnessed autumn for the first time in my life when I went abroad. I don't have Autumn in my country it is not very noticed.