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Autumn Haiku

Tonight the moonlight Lays tipsy whisper in breeze Our owls dance all night _______________________________ 20/9/2016

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/22/2016 4:50:00 PM

A creative scene you have written with your haiku, Probir! Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2016 5:41:00 AM

Thank you ...

Sarban Bhattacharya

Date: 9/21/2016 3:26:00 PM

A lucid image. Nice.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2016 12:15:00 AM

Thank you ...

Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2016 9:47:00 PM

Probir, I like your haiku a lot, best of luck in the contest ~

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:02:00 AM

BW, Thank you ...

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/20/2016 7:17:00 PM

Very nice :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:02:00 AM

Thanks ...

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/20/2016 6:46:00 PM

Loved those dancing owls. This really grabbed the reader. Much congrats.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:03:00 AM

I am glad you liked it ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 6:44:00 PM

this creates a lovely nature picture, Probir. Nicely done. Congrats.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:04:00 AM

Thank you ...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2016 4:56:00 PM

Lovely autumn haiku. LINDA

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:06:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by after quite some time and thank you once again for liking and commenting ...

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2016 4:37:00 PM

Many congrats Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:08:00 AM

Thank you, Jan ...

Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 4:20:00 PM

Probir-lovely haiku, and I have always like owls :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lovely friend :)-luloo

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/21/2016 12:11:00 AM

Thank you for the chance to bring this haiku out of the autumn wind ... And then this chance placement too ... Thank you ...