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Autumn Haiku

Trees in leafy crowns Of red orange yellow brown Yet no birds bow down For Brian Strand's Images of Fall contest

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Date: 10/30/2009 10:46:00 PM
so right! the birds are King! Light & Love
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Date: 10/9/2009 4:30:00 AM
such a beautifully rich haiku! Tough I haven't experienced autumn, makes me feel like I was in the midst of it! Thanks also for your comments on my poem :)
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Date: 9/23/2009 3:45:00 PM
this is a great haiku .. you have played this one out so nice :) . Marco
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:52:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/31/2009 7:11:00 PM
a colorful haiku..with a great autum feel ....very nice!
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Date: 8/28/2009 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/27/2009 11:18:00 AM
Nice Haiku. God speed in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 10:38:00 AM
"Each tree dons its crown"....lovely. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna
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