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One can hardly take a breath at all For brilliance splashed against the wall has reasoned with a summer's soul and paints the season with vibrant gold The brittle breeze as evening falls is mixed with smoke from burning piles of leaves we raked one afternoon stacked high with colors bold and wild Smoke whirls up high above the house Each silent garden laid to rest, As the close of day leaves nothing left but crimson skies, and colors red We can hear the music of the trees, with rustling sounds, stained red and tan While wind seeks out the apple tree, And scents the air with celestial zest The mighty oak drops acorns, freed, Brown squirrels have scurried to their nest They've stored a harvest from the earth, We'll watch as geese form silhouettes And when the trees are barren branched, A world takes rest, to start anew While autumn prances through the hills, With stain ablaze in amber hues The heart is filled with peace of mind, As embers warm our home tonight While weary gather near the flame, This year at end, we bid adieu One can hardly take a breath at all For brilliance splashed against the wall Has reasoned with a summer's soul To paint the season edged in gold ...... __________________________________ 10/27/16 Contest: Autumn Fire Sponsor: Mystic Rose

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Date: 11/6/2016 6:45:00 AM
You are and have always been one of my favourite poets. I can't tell you how often I've read "Where The Sycamore Grew". Love this gorgeous poem. A Fav.
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Date: 11/6/2016 1:46:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive piece, tinged with loss and longing. Love it, Carrie. Viv x
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:04:00 AM
Wow, this is so beautiful, I can picture the scenes clearly... very nice.
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Date: 10/30/2016 1:24:00 AM
Stunning visuals Carrie and a rhyme scheme to be envied, ...love it ..Ian
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Date: 10/29/2016 8:43:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/29/2016 1:53:00 PM
Very beautiful.! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/29/2016 3:09:00 AM
Wow Carrie, I see why this poem got such a high placement. It is stunning! I adore autumn and you have painted her gloriously! Congratulations! 7 : )
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Date: 10/28/2016 9:25:00 PM
Beautifully crafted, Carrie. Congratulations...
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Date: 10/28/2016 7:02:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:30:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:02:00 AM
Warm sentiments and impressive imagery really stand out in this poem. Splash of an ending Carrie. Now that's Autumn! 7+
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Date: 10/28/2016 1:59:00 AM
Awesome picture you have painted with your words, Carrie:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 10/27/2016 3:56:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Carrie autumn is my favourite season and you have painted a perfect picture. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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