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Autumn Fire:

If only my soul could express, The way I feel in autumns caress, With its beauty, it's so stifling, Thou heart joins in and wants to sing, Its vast colours reflecting in depth, As leaves start turning in different specks, If spring is the bringer, then autumns the seer. And if the sun could it would shed a tear, For the autumn fire burns in me so, From all four seasons, it's the hardest to let go. /|\ (10/25/2016)

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Date: 10/25/2016 3:41:00 PM
oooh, that one line is so awesome: If summer is the bringer, autumn is the seer! You did very well with this challenge. It's on my to do list for this week!!
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Date: 10/25/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, have a great day x Budgie /|\
Date: 10/25/2016 1:03:00 PM
ohh, these lines are aflame with autumn's glory.. finely done, rick..huggs
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Date: 10/25/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks Nette for your positive feedback /|\
Date: 10/25/2016 10:40:00 AM
This is very beautifully written, Rick, good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/25/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Eve, as long as everyone else stays out of it I'll win, Haha. Thanks again /|\
Date: 10/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Oh Rick......... This has really touched me. It's beautiful.
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:01:00 AM
To be fair I like three out of four seasons, winter is just too cold for me. I'm glad it made you feel that way, Kay. Mission accomplished! Haha. /|\
Date: 10/25/2016 6:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading ... a nice poem ...
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Date: 10/25/2016 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Probir /|\

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