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Autumn Fire The flame of fall’s ablaze in Maple trees. Their dying ardor loudly do we see. Hues of red, gold and saffron fill the eye, contrasting with the pewter pregnant sky. Crayola season of cool air or warm, makes longing for the love of hearth and home. Our August frolic seems much less of zest, as autumn’s fire now draws us nigh to rest. These velvet days with little summer suns, we cherish dear, our last few tepid ones. Florescent light the makes the leaves aglow, sunshine so bright it heats the Earth below. An autumn fire will linger in our hearts, long after fall and Hallows Eve departs. A reddened ember smolders in the mind, to burn real bright with next October time. 10/23/16

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Date: 7/3/2019 9:26:00 AM
My imagination was set ablaze with the beauty of the rhythm, rhymes and contrasting colorful imagery of your poem, Janis. Every line a precious gem of appreciation for the Fall season. Gorgeous! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/13/2018 9:40:00 AM
Such a pretty poem, congrats on your win Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/10/2018 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Janis on your fine win.
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Date: 1/9/2018 8:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janis. Lovely.
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Date: 2/17/2017 10:42:00 AM
Lovely imagery Janis, congratulations...
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Charlie.
Date: 2/17/2017 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Sushma. I appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 2/17/2017 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful fall poem, Janis.
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes. Blessings.
Date: 11/3/2016 4:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Janis. Many congrats on your win. Lainey
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Date: 11/3/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine.
Date: 10/28/2016 7:06:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Janis. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/28/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thanks and blessings, Janis
Date: 10/27/2016 11:41:00 PM
A beautiful description of Autumn. Congratulations, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/28/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thanks Afzal. Challenging contest.
Date: 10/27/2016 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful and mellow, Janis. The colouful images are delightful, and the ending is lovely. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/27/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 10/25/2016 7:39:00 PM
"Crayola season" is the most inspiring phrase I've run across in a while. Nice. Enjoyed it all, the apt picture you painted. Hope it does well in the contest. Thanks, Dave
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Date: 10/26/2016 5:45:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Dave. Glad that you enjoyed it. As for the contest, who really knows?
Date: 10/24/2016 1:54:00 PM
- Janis, a beautiful poem :) - Good luck in the contest, hope you win - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... a 7 :)
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Date: 10/25/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes Anne. Ps and the rating.
Date: 10/24/2016 9:22:00 AM
Such a warming write, Mrs Janis. Just beautiful.
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Date: 10/25/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 10/23/2016 10:16:00 PM
Beautifully written, Janis. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Janis Thompson
Date: 10/25/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Eve. I appreciate the well wishes.

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