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Autumn Falls

The air chills slightly ¬ Leaves whistle in careful touch Whilst the nights draw in ~ Blued skies mingle against greys Autumn is calling the tune ~~~ Greenery now turns ¬ Her vibrantly yesterdays In chameleon change ~ Richness of colours now flow Blends of the fall so grace us ~~~ Cobalt laden skies ¬ Amidst the ebony dark Impending storms close ~ The passing of Summer, stark What we lose today, returns ~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/19/2010 4:52:00 PM
Beautiful. So many sensory details that the poems seems to come to life in a picture that paints itself before your eyes. ~Cheyenne~
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Date: 10/15/2010 3:50:00 PM
Nice Tanka, and your words do flow well...
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:46:00 PM
I enjoyed the well worded tanka with good images, James
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:02:00 PM
beautiful tankas James, love it
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:01:00 PM
Hello James, This is one of my favorites. I feel this poem, its like a beautiful painting come to life Thank you As ALways, Shar
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