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Autumn Dreams

Autumn, quixotic dreams, broken summer, fallen, dramatic colors are screaming, softly.
Walking over snapping twigs, echoed melodies. Metallic tasting cooling breeze, whispers.
Gentle, fluttering leaves tickle aspirant skin, falling caressingly from trees, teasing.
Serene setting calling, lazy fragrant autumn flowers echo stained foliage, beauty. 10/23/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/29/2015 9:07:00 PM
James, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 10/30/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 10/28/2015 9:49:00 PM
Excellent imagery and word usage, James! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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James Inman
Date: 10/29/2015 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Kim, very nice of you to say.
Date: 10/27/2015 5:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win James. Really like the rarely used words great Job.
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James Inman
Date: 10/29/2015 6:48:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, John.
Date: 10/27/2015 5:50:00 PM
this is one of the best ones i've read, very good use of language, i like your writing - congrats on your win!
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James Inman
Date: 10/29/2015 6:48:00 AM
Charlotte, thank you for reading my poem and for the wonderful comment.
Date: 10/23/2015 1:40:00 PM
I love it! I love the form and everything! You're so talented
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James Inman
Date: 10/23/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Elis.

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