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Mosaics of orange and crimson rot with the last migrating duck. And barren soil, littered with death, stripped of its grandeur, turns to muck. Autumn dawdles well past its end, no longer painting leaves with its light. And as scarlet inks the clouds pink, twilight slowly morphs into night. Murky skies colored charcoal-grey blotter patches of blue away. And like a black blanket of smoke, shadows stealthily shadow day. Bare branches rattle in the wind, contemplating the coming snow. And clinging to the horizon, the sun's bleeding fingers let go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2018 12:09:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:31:00 PM
Many poems lament the arrival of winter, I like how this poem invited winter in! Great write Emile, hope you doing well!
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your time, I'm doing ok most days... thanks for your concern. Emile.
Date: 11/17/2016 11:03:00 AM
what wonderful personification and vivid imagery. Emile this is absolutely delightful - I adore this time of year and you have depicted it so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I truly appreciate you taking the time to give me such encouraging comments. Emile.
Date: 11/17/2016 10:27:00 AM
This poem is amazing. Excellent writing. Great imagery. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.

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