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Autumn Dance

I watch the red leaf outside my window being swept away by the wind and as the wind subsides it falls then it's on the move again in the air dancing at random mixing with the yellow and brown then it swirls and rises up and falls again with the other leaves on the floor and after awhile it does an encore

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Date: 2/18/2016 10:48:00 AM
Hi Cindi: Thank you for your kind comment to an old poem.
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/22/2015 6:52:00 AM
Thank you. Laura for your comment.
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:45:00 PM
What a beautiful and creative observation of the falling leave, Ralph. I really like your descriptions, and thought this was very well written. A 7 from me :)
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Date: 7/17/2015 9:58:00 PM
This poem captures all of the color and magic of my favorite season... Beautifully penned, Ralph! I am adding it to my favs!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/18/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Kelly: It's an old favorite of mine.
Date: 7/15/2015 3:23:00 PM
this is very very cute. Fall is coming all too soon!
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:06:00 AM
Hi Connie: Long time no speak . Mahalo for the comment.
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:36:00 AM
I was enchanted Ralph. I adore autumn and I long for it every summer.
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