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Autumn Coats

The stubborn trees remain in green, Annoyed to change too soon, Like people who wear P.J.’s Several hours after noon. Their friends have donned their autumn coats In oranges and golds, With acorns brought by squirrels Tucked away inside the folds. The ochres and the emeralds mingle On the highway’s edge, Providing pops of color As the rain performs its dredge. Drawing closer to the city, All the muted colors fade ‘Cause their city cousins aren’t dressed yet For the fall parade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/9/2016 7:31:00 PM
Hi ilene, yes you are in your Autumn, I have seen pictures of your beautiful Autumn's, the colours amaze me, this is a lovely poem on the way your Autumn emerges, we are in our spring and it still seems like winter but I suppose it will be hotting up soon and then we will be moaning about the heat, hope you are well, take care my friend.......Vera
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Date: 10/9/2016 6:28:00 PM
Maybe they don't have as far to travel. Lol This is a wonderful take on autumn, Ilene. City life always did seem a little drab, to me.
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:40:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Ilene:-) Autumn is in full show here - crunchy leaves on the ground and the hills are a patchwork of yellow and lilac with the heather and gorse - I took lots of pictures today I hope they turn out:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:27:00 PM
I wonder if the city heat keeps them green longer. Very nice Ilene
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