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Autumn Air

It’s near, it’s here you can feel and smell it too Autumn has blown in; the air is worn out, not new The decaying of the leaves fills the autumn breeze Blowing free and fast it brings in the autumn sneeze… Flu season has arrived with the decay filled autumn air It’s not right we didn’t get a summer, it really isn’t fair All the seasons strike a fear in someway for all of us Winter snows, the north wind blows and makes you want to cuss… Spring brings with it hay-fever, another sneezing season Summer gives us sunburn, but we risk that for a reason We all need the sun we bathe and wallow and breathe it in But when the autumn reaches us, it really is a sin... Dark nights swoop on down, just like a Halloween ghost Winds batter us all inland and not only on the coast Rain is ever constant, breeding fresh new bugs for flu So autumn air is for the flu-jab, it’s now time for that to renew. © 31/10/2102~GG~ Contest entry for “Up In the Autumn Air”

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Date: 11/12/2012 10:26:00 AM
Great poem Mandy, enjoyed reading it....Seren
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:56:00 PM
Great work penned for the contest..Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:56:00 AM
Dear MandyTams, Superb Write I see Your a little down on Autumn I wonder if YOU lived where I lived on a Mountain in the fall if You Would still feel that way The colors below in the valley and the mountain range across the way. Watching the geese practice their V formation see the creatures of Nature Foraging for food Quite Beautiful LOVE Always and FOREVER YOUREternal Liege...HG
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mandy.. :-)
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Date: 11/5/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2012 6:10:00 AM
congratulations on your win Mandy :) cheers! Its an awesome poem..
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Date: 11/4/2012 7:27:00 AM
Sweetly flowing lines,Mandy.Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/3/2012 10:20:00 PM
CONGRATS MANDY ON A SPLENDID WRITE AND WIN WITH GORGEOUS IMAGERY LUV ..
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:44:00 PM
hey you had a very unique approach to the contest and it worked very well, Mandy. I sure enjoyed your entry in the contest!
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:22:00 PM
Oh dear. Please don't lose your sense of humor with the gloomy fall. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/3/2012 6:26:00 PM
Please stay well get your shot & use your sleeve if you sneeze! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2012 4:11:00 PM
Congrats, good one this winner...
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Date: 11/1/2012 7:04:00 AM
I sure miss the summer. I don't think I am ready for the winter. I think autumn will come by and go quick. Lovely write, Mandy. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:42:00 PM
had my jab, for the flu, you have described the weather here perfectly... to think that i left australia, because the sun shone, constantly.. folk here in yorkshire, think we are supid.. maybe they are right.
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:46:00 PM
I like this Mandy Tams! jimbo
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Jimbo xx

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