Autumn

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~Autumn~ (Tanka) Summer is gone now Fall with her beautiful face Softly just arrives Spreading joy with her colors And thrilling with her magic. Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2015 May.15.2015

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/16/2015 2:08:00 PM

Your poem has reminded me why this season is my favorite. I truly enjoyed this wonderful write! Very nicely penned, Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/20/2015 3:42:00 PM

Thank you ever kindly Kelly,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate it dear friend.My very favorite time of the year of all the seasons too, my second one being spring of course:) So glad that you enjoyed my pen here Kelly:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God Bless you!:) D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2015 1:30:00 PM

WoW! Autumn thrills with her magic colors and changes the Nature in to more beauty. Excellently done with a very few words. 7++, i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/20/2015 3:36:00 PM

Thank you ever kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciated dear friend.So much beauty for our eyes such a blessing, isn't it? :)Thank you for the 7 plus and all.Very kind of you!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God Bless you! :) D

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2015 2:11:00 AM

divine images and imagery I do love this time of year! Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/20/2015 3:38:00 PM

Thank you ever kindly Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it all dear friend.My very favorite time of the year too and then spring:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God Bless you! :) D