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Autumn

Fall will start It is near Is in the air Now Say Good-bye To summer Hot weather is Gone Air Crispy Starts to cool No more burning Sun Birds Migrate Butterfly Will return next Year Trees Change garb Leaves transform From golden to Brown Day To thank God for all Thanksgiving Day Is Good Food on table Family Gods blessings for All Pies Turkey Cranberry sauce Apple cider Sweet Fall Season Of wonder Enjoy rich change Smile Praise Thank God Fall is great Serenity Brings Mild Weather Azure sky Togetherness Nice Fall Brings calm And repose After summers Storms. Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 10.11.14

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Date: 10/13/2014 1:19:00 AM
This is amazing write! Beautiful imagery and form, too. And I like the flow of your poem. I will fave this and you if you don't mind my dear poet and friend Dorian. By the way, I love your sonnetina rispetto, a very nice form you've introduced. I am so interested to make a try on this form soon. Thank you so much! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:26:00 PM
How lovely all in lanterne form it appears!
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/13/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea! ;) love and light! xxx D.
Date: 10/12/2014 5:09:00 PM
what a very beautifully drawn picture excellent pen
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/12/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Liam! :) love peace and light! xxxx D.
Date: 10/12/2014 1:00:00 PM
- Yes, it is sad to say goodbye to summer - but autumn is beautiful as well - thanks for the beautiful poem, Dorian! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/12/2014 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! ;) oxox Love peace and light! xxxx D.
Date: 10/11/2014 12:58:00 PM
Very sweet change in fall that brings happiness to all. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/12/2014 12:59:00 PM
Yes, fall is that and much more BL my sweet friend! ;) thank you for all your kindness and lovely friendhip ;) Hugs! Love and light! xxx D.
Date: 10/11/2014 11:57:00 AM
I can see the beauty through the lanterne's light, Dorian
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/12/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by snd your kind words, Dr.Ram! Have a great day!;) Love peace and light! xxx D.

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