Autumn

All had sown our talents, Under the scorched sun of season past; Today we dwell in harvest abundance, Unto the autumn be the glory, Mounts of reward,season of yield; Now we are truly the kings. 4/10/2014

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/27/2014 10:18:00 PM

A bountiful harvest takes time and great care to grow. If it is done right, the reward will be worth all the hard work.... This is a wonderful interpretation of the autumn season. Beautifully written, Kayode!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/16/2014 9:52:00 PM

A unique and fresh look at autumn. Kudos on your win!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/17/2014 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Connie,it is a great honour to have you here.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/15/2014 1:13:00 PM

We reap what we sow and what we work hard for! Enjoyed this lovely autumn poem, Kayod. I notice lately you won with this acrostic, so congratulations, too. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 1:24:00 PM

An angel visits me today,his name is Paul,thank you so much.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 1:26:00 AM

Nicely crafted acrostic on autumn, Kayod5, congrats

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/11/2014 5:37:00 PM

I thought this one was very unique; it's quite rare for me to like a poem with scant imagery, but I really liked this; elegantly well written with good flow from line to line - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/11/2014 5:58:00 PM

Immense thanks Charlotte for this great honour done me,have a wonderful weekend.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2014 5:30:00 PM

I love the autumn's rich harvest you have portrayed this beautifully many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/11/2014 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Jan, happy weekend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/4/2014 5:54:00 PM

splendid work as scintillating as autumn, kayod... bring it on.. huggs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/4/2014 11:33:00 AM

Wonderful... I so love this season... so many amazing poems on Autumn!!! All my best to you. God bless you and happy writing. love and prayers ~ Gina

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/4/2014 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Regina ,it is great honour to have you on my page,may the Lord reward you in folds.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 6:21:00 AM

- Harvesting of nature's food - Lovely written Kayod5 - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/4/2014 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Anne,happy weekend too.