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Autumn

Amplitude of seasoning--spicy colors, zesty scents, Unrestrained passion conceals a crumbling heart; Twilight violins in tumult bow strident cacophony, Unmasking the harvest madness in the corn. Maternal? Never! So unlike her sister Spring, Nonconforming Bohemian is all Autumn plans to be. Copyright, September 29, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 10/12/2014 10:16:00 AM
Amazing write Faye! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:20:00 AM
Awesome acrostic on autumn, Faye, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/11/2014 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this brilliantly penned poem Faye.
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:09:00 PM
Congrats on the win Faye.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:49:00 PM
A wonderful Autumn in your write, Congratulations Faye on your win.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:35:00 PM
what a COOL poem, Autumn as bohemian. VEry cleverly done and won!!! Congrats, Faye
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:27:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations Faye its lovely to read this again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2014 4:28:00 PM
Wonderful wrap up last line there gal friend! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2014 4:13:00 PM
I loved this one, and the only thing that kept it from 1st place was "unbridled passion", which came slightly too close to cliche...I loved "twilight violins", and that fourth line was intriguing, and I liked autumn as a "nonconforming bohemian" - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/30/2014 3:25:00 AM
- Faye, a beautiful autumn poem - Thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:39:00 PM
gosh, you did all four. Gotta see them all. You have started out VERY well!!
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Date: 9/29/2014 1:16:00 PM
Stunning acrostic Faye good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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