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Autumn

Autumn arrives as dark nights draw in, Changing the landscape from Summer's green trim In shades of gold, red and purple brown, Falling leaves dying on sodden ground Freshly bedecked in shades of golden hues and flame flaring reds of one's and two's Her hazel curls assume autumnal tones, Wind lashed by whirling dropped pine cones, Dishevelled, she shelters against damp blackened walls As her tattered patchwork apparel about her falls Nearby a leaf choked fountain no longer spurts As squirrels and stoats hide in her skirts Gathering her wayward children and twig sculptured pet She scurries across harvested fields, maternally driven and feeling bereft.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/22/2014 12:26:00 PM
Hi Elly, Just logged in and received your email also. Thank you for both contacts I shall reply a.s.a.p. This poem I mentally saw as I was composing it, all there waiting to be converted into words of expression. Although I have to be in the right frame of mind with no distractions. So pleased you love this poem too. Spring has shown it's face here this past week but winter reappeared last night with his icy fingers on cars etc.I read your birthday was on the 28th mine is on Mothering Sunday 30x
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Date: 2/17/2014 4:04:00 AM
enjoyed this view on autumn Theresa well penned hugs
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/17/2014 4:32:00 AM
Hi Shadow, I wasn't too sure whether to submit this poem, as it is no longer the season, but now I am so pleased to receive your very kind comments. Hugs too. Regards, Theresa x
Date: 2/16/2014 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful Imagery of Autumn, its my favourite season and with the dreadful weather we have at the moment I will be willing it to be here. Happy writing and reading Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2014 4:35:00 AM
Every season brings special things into our lives this poems is just so beautifully observed. Jan
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/17/2014 4:01:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you for your kind comments and for taking the time to read it. I too would welcome a walk through a leaf strewn country park instead of the torrential rain and wind this winter. Although my favourite season is Spring. Regards, Theresa x
Date: 2/14/2014 11:33:00 PM
Theresa, I like this walk through nature. .. Thanks for the enrichment... Verlena - Dark Sunshine
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