Autumn

a leaf falls from an October tree hitches a ride on the breeze before drifting to earth.

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Rituko Shindo

Date: 10/1/2019 8:06:00 PM

Reading this poem reminded me that the Earth is often called the “Water Planet”. I thought that the dead leaves would get a fresh life again by falling on the the water planet. I felt the beginning of life beyond the end of life.

Carol Fillmore
Date: 10/1/2019 8:13:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Ritsuko!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2010 6:37:00 AM

I enjoyed the flavor of this one..Like riding on the wind..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 8:40:00 PM

this is wonderful!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2010 1:33:00 PM

like this one, on the leafs journey lol, i like the second line, enjoyed your write...P.D.

Rick Parise

Date: 9/8/2010 1:15:00 PM

Cool~I watched this event in my minds eye~Great imagery~God bless you Carol~Rick