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Authority

I've got no authority to love There’s the uproar Who’s going to side with a poor man many obviously, No money, no power my words don’t matter Who’s going to make this stranger’s dream reality Talk to my mother, whose smile I live for Talk to my father, whose words I live by Your Majesty and I Right now we are two different species But it’s alright I've faced much A few thousand jabs won’t kill me yet

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2016 10:22:00 PM

nice to see this one again. linda

Jannatun Zaman

Date: 4/30/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you for such a warm welcome!! Please feel free to critique my poems I really want to improve!

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:15:00 PM

JANNATUN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jannatun Zaman
Date: 4/30/2015 12:48:00 PM

Thank you very very much! I've never had such a warm welcome like this before. You are very generous. Thank you so much! I look forward to communicating and working with you in the future on poetry. What do you think about my poem Authority?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 3:58:00 PM

Jannatun, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Jannatun Zaman
Date: 4/30/2015 12:50:00 PM

Thank you! I feel great already! I feel very lucky to have found this community! I would like to know what you think of my poem Authority. I appreciate all critique :) !