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Aurora Sometimes

Just being whimsical, needing more tomorrows.. not enough smiles and side glances allow this one request to forget yesterday's sorrows and last chances. Taught me to talk without words just holding your hand a heartbeat pulse tellin' me, ev'rything's gonna be alright. Swept up in my arms, deep into my baby blues where internal storm brews Edith singing no regrets... how 'bout you? Light as aire, heh, just a feather that day both carried away, oh how I wish you woulda, wish you coulda stayed. Sometimes, when light fades space closes in aurora borealis to phase shifted night remember all static electric nights.. only sometimes.

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Date: 12/7/2023 3:44:00 PM
an almost bittersweet poem of losing a love so sweet and dear...the last words had such a eerie, almost sad tone. Nicely done, Sara
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Date: 12/27/2023 9:53:00 PM
Sara, Thank you, it isn't always in the cards. -Richard
Date: 12/4/2023 6:48:00 PM
This is a delightful poem that has a depth of romanticism. Thoughts connect to the finale, "sometimes".
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Date: 12/27/2023 9:50:00 PM
Hi Hilda, Thank you, always. -Richard
Date: 12/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
Richard this feels so bittersweet. Awesome imagery, my friend
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Date: 12/27/2023 9:49:00 PM
Andrea, Thank you for the comment. The bittersweet is something I'm working on. Sometimes. -Richard

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