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Aurora and Avalanche

Aurora and Avalanche Midnight Avalanche of words that tore my heart, Flooded my eyes and ripped my soul apart, An accident that took him far, left incurable wounds and deep scars, Streamers of light flashed before my eyes, Thoughtless and speechless, losing myself into dark sky, Aurora of the dawn since then has never been and seen me bright ! Written March 6th, 2015 For contest by Anthony Slausen Awarded HM

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Date: 4/30/2015 7:48:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:31:00 AM
Dr. Upma, stopping back to read your poem again and to congratulate you for your HM win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:52:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:29:00 PM
Very beautiful Barbara, a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:58:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:30:00 AM
Sadness comes in many cloths, some more weighted than others...good luck in the contest Dr.
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Date: 3/6/2015 9:17:00 AM
Such a powerful poem, Dr. Upma, that images the themes required in such a brilliant but sad way. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:15:00 AM
I love your take on the theme! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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