Aurora and Avalanche

ice grows and loses track in the fossil forest in killing spree he does not know wife Aurora sad tears drop in rainbow scarf Aurora And Avalanche - Poetry Contest Sponsor Anthony Slausen

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Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 7:48:00 PM

RAJAT, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2015 2:52:00 PM

Rajat, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2015 2:33:00 PM

Very beautiful as always Rajat , your descriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/27/2015 11:58:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/1/2015 7:10:00 PM

Beautiful tanka, Rajat my friend. You've really mastered these types of forms - encapsulating whole stories into compact few lines. 7. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/1/2015 5:59:00 PM

YUP!!! A WINNER! That's my prediction but don't take that to the bank!!! Cheers my friend!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2015 4:33:00 PM

I like your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2015 2:49:00 PM

Creative way to go for the contest..reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by! At least the tears were in a rainbow scarf. Sara