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Aura of Sun

Aura of Sun Descending quietly behind the mountains was the shimmering sun of a glorious life, An infinite canvas of the heavenly blue faded into the tranquil aura of twilight, Where all desires reach an ultimate horizon once was a sight for sore eyes, Are we reaping hope of a barren insight ? Written August 2nd, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma For contest "The answer- in less than 7 lines " by SKAT A Written in honour of Sun.... Sunset itself is a beauty, with this everything stands tranquil, Next Sunrise gives a hope n also means a light within !!

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Date: 8/19/2015 8:47:00 PM
big congrats and also for the cool way you answered "the question!!"
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Date: 8/18/2015 7:13:00 AM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:15:00 PM
Dr Upma. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2015 4:24:00 AM
so lovely Dr Upma gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:36:00 AM
Dr. Upma. I enjoyed this nature poem. Sunsets are among my favorite things to watch. This poem speaks to me about learning to appreciate the beauty that we have before it fades, as all things will. Curtis
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:14:00 PM
The author used superb imagery and gentle words to bring her feelings to the page. Well done. Emile.
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:08:00 PM
Upma, so beautifully penned for the contest
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