Aura

our choice is white shining brightly at night aflame

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2023 4:35:00 PM

Love this. So short and sweet

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2023 7:01:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/17/2023 4:11:00 PM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, yes when i close my eyes I see flashes of white.it swirls around in a circle in brightness then slowly fades. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2023 10:31:00 AM

Hello Unseeing seeker, oh, thank you for telling me. Blessings my friend. /Darlene\

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2023 7:01:00 PM

You are very gifted, dear Darlene

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/17/2023 2:54:00 AM

Wise choice.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2023 7:01:00 PM

Eve Roper

Date: 9/16/2023 9:38:00 PM

Great Than-Bauk poem. I've never tried the form.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/17/2023 7:00:00 PM

It’s not so easy as it looks!